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05-02-2003, 12:27 PM
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The Biggest Rob Around
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Corpus Christi
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rhyme time
try to rhyme
you can do a line
or five at a time
it matters not
lets see what you got
i need a tissue now
for my snot
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open minds are like sand dollars - they do exist but finding one in tact is never easy. water erodes them, nature breaks them, and every time i get a chance, I SMASH THE HELL OUT OF THEM WITH MY FOOT!!!
i have come to the groggy realization that my entire life is lived in the effort to avoid boredom...
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05-02-2003, 01:02 PM
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whore
Join Date: Jan 2003
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Although this game
is kinda lame
my curiousity did pique,
but first we must speak
of rhyming 'rhyme' with 'line'
in your rhyme, but not mine.
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05-02-2003, 04:12 PM
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The Biggest Rob Around
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my rhyme was meant to be purposely bad
or so you should have seen
'cuz mindless rhymes make me not sad
i laugh and cause a scene
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05-02-2003, 11:49 PM
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need an outlet for your writings that bad Rob?
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05-03-2003, 12:13 AM
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The Biggest Rob Around
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well since you stopped critiquing my poems i need to vent
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05-03-2003, 07:47 AM
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whore
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Quote:
Originally posted by Big Rob on 05-02-2003 at 04:12 PM
my rhyme was meant to be purposely bad
or so you should have seen
'cuz mindless rhymes make me not sad
i laugh and cause a scene
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Obvious to the most casual observer
my karma is such I'm the usual deserver
of writing and reading poetry
with little or no symetry.
The comment I hear most pertaining to it
is "Oh my God who wrote this ...."
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...and his ghost can be heard as you walk along the bill-a-bong, "Won't you come waltzing, Matilda, with me?"
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05-05-2003, 09:26 PM
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FBIA
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: Corpus Christi
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rhymeing sucks
almost like a buck
who doesnt come from a duck
but i have a shoe
one and one make two
and my grandpas name is lou
sucks i know heehee
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